Can someone view my resume and give me some kind of feedback?

Objective Presently seeking an administrative assistant position where I can work with a creative team of individuals, where promotional opportunities are achievable. Experience 1998–Present U.S. Security Associates New York, NY Supervisor ( Young & Rubicam Brands) • Answer phones, faxes and emails. • Assist customers / clients with incoming questions • Monthly reports and theft reports. • Schedule and payroll. 1996–1998 162nd Dental Office New York, NY Receptionist • Responsible for updating calendar and scheduling appointments. • Filing and creating records for new patients • Assisting patients with incoming questions. • Follow-up calls, after patients visit. • Answer the phones and fax. • Verify insurance coverage / co pay. 1994–1996 Ronald Gerard Delphin, M.D. New York, NY Receptionist • Filing and creating records for new patients • Answer the phones and fax. • Verify insurance coverage. Education 2002-2006 Bronx Community College Bronx, NY A.A., Liberal Arts / Early Childhood Development. 2006-Present Lehman College Bronx, NY B.A., Major: History and a Minor: Early Childhood Education Certificates / SKILLS • CPR/AED, First Aid and Fire guard certificate • Lotus Notes • Microsoft Word, Microsoft Outlook, Microsoft PowerPoint, Microsoft Excel, • Customer service skills • Proactive and detailed oriented • Bilingual English / Spanish. *furnish reference up on request.
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In the objective: "where promotional opportunities are available" not are achievable - or just ", with opportunity for advancement" which is probably better Under experience: just questions, not incoming questions - what other kind are there? On your BA - the way you state it, is ambiguous as to whether you've completed it. Since you say "-present", I'm assuming you haven't, so I'd say something like "working toward BA..." or "completion expected xxxxxxx". I wouldn't put SKILLS all in caps unless I put "certificates", experience, and education all in caps also - either way is OK but be consistent. last line - no space in the middle of upon - and might say "References available...: rather than "*furnish reference..." Other than those few minor things, looks pretty good. Good luck.
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